This was cute. The setup felt a little heavy-handed in the first 30 pages or so, but that may just be because I've read Persuasion about twelve times and was thinking, "Okay, I got it."
Cohen deviated from Persuasion's storyline enough that I didn't spend the entire story knowing exactly what was going to happen next. It's an adaptation, so it was apparent sometimes, but not always. So basically, I give her props for telling a completely separate story while harkening back to the basis for the tale.
Funniest moment in the book: Anne's grandmother lambasting women for trying to live Jane Austen novels, complaining that Persuasion's Anne Elliot was way too long-suffering to be allowed to be happy in real life. A clever bit of lampshade hanging